Reviews for Existance
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
Existance is actually existence... unless I'm missing something.

I like this. I think the first stanza could use some commas, but other than that it's really great. I especially love the content in the first stanza, but the format in the last one is really great too. Nice job.
socks-lost chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I really like this piece. I love how all of your work can express who you are or what your feeling at that moment in time so well, even in a few short lines. Its really kool. Not many people can do it. Its all like raw emotion but refined. If that makes any since at all. Keep up the good work!
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
''to be the fallback plan, the last resort'' That has to be my favorite part of this piece, if I have to choose. Otherwise this entire piece is very good. Keep it Up!
sweets555 chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
If it helps at all, you mean a lot to me. Who else would review me so kindly? Or listen?

You're way too good for the people you've been telling me about.