Reviews for Ghosts
xxclOsedxx chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Brilliant. Simply brilliant.
classic violet chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Beautiful. The third, fifth, sixth and seventh group of lines really got to me. Good job.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
I love how you describe her crying in the first too lines because it's very original, which is hard since crying is discussed a lot in poetry.

I like the format with the parenthesis... those fit well and the descriptions of Father Time were really nice.

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Aquafied chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
makes me think of persephone.

yet much more modern
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
Excellent choice of words, makes this piece have great flow and imagery. Keep it Up!