Reviews for Starting Over
ninipols chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
I WISH YOU CONTINUED IT INTO SOMETHING BIGGER!
aguynagirl chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Very interesting concept. It reminds me in it's feel of some the the dystopian feel in part of HG Well's Time Machine. The world in the future imagined is bleak, but there is always hope for better. I think it played out well.

The descriptive writing style was good and helped to build the intensity in the fight scene.

I look forward to reading/reviewing more of your stories, especially the longer ones when they are available in future :).
superinsane95 chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
very original and creative! i love it!
Soar to Survive chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
This is an excellent story. I like the way you introduced information about the setting without it dragging on and on and on.

One-of-a-kind, excellent work.

Keep writing!