|Reviews for The Pact|
| waste.these.words chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Aw, this was amazing and totally true to teenage life.
| asylum writer chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
A little cliched, maybe, but cute and still pretty good.
The Broadway thing seemed kind of thrown in there at the end. It would've been cool if she'd had a love of singing throughout the story or something.
If Justin's 7 in 1995, how can they graduate in 2008? He'd be 20 by then...
Just a little constructive criticism, but other than that, I liked it.
| Katie Saychiadu chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Hi! Interesting story... I feel like a lot of information was containted in this chapter, but I'm assuming that you did it that way on purpose. Your writing is very nice and I like your section breaks.
The only piece of advice I would offer is to recalculate your timeline. It doesn't add up properly is Justin was 7 when they met.
Other than that, I like it a lot and I hope you continue.