|Reviews for She's the Girl|
| scarlet stars chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
You're not the only person that is "that girl". Loved this :)
Mostly because I could relate to it.
-A Raindrop's Shadow
| deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
I think everyone has that type of person in them, at least a little. I think those people are cool personally.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
I was her too. Great poem!
| Getuie chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Sad, to the point. I like the fact that you're using a lot of physical description instead of emotional. For some reason it just works that much better because the emotional aspect is anyone's guess... and is really dependent on whether the reader can relate to each situation. The last verse is particularly striking - as it was intended to be. The 'still' in I'm still pretending adds volumes that wouldn't have been there were it left out. It gives that added sense of frustration to the speaker.
| Jennifer chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
It's way to early in the morning and i don't tottaly get the last line, (because i just woke up,) but i get it. And it conveys so much. Again, perfect.