Reviews for The Art of Destruction
misery sister chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
I like this beginning. It's written smoothly, but at the same time, it doesn't really grab my attention. Maybe, you meant to do it subtly with your smooth writing, but sometimes, for those readers who may not be that bright - maybe you could add some more dialogue, to give us a sense of our main character.
Lissezplait chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Great start! My writing looks like crap compared to yours. I'm looking forward to the next chapter for sure!

And thanks for reviewing my story! I hope you like where I take it!