|Reviews for Lucy|
| lokan chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Wow. That was a really great story. I love it.
I never saw the Jack and Jill thing coming, which I feel stupid for not seeing, but I don't think there's anything that needs to be fixed.
| Grogie13 chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
I finally know the truth of this "kid-y" poem.
Ring Around the Rosies had to do with the plague, did it not?
Do you mind if I make a story similar to this, only of a different poem?
Grogie13 (FanFiction dot Net user)
| Bob Evans chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Okay, that's some of the best fiction I've ever read on this site. I think the thing that won me over the most was the narrative; so many people just can't seem to pull it off, but you did it very proffesionally. I felt like I was reading from a well-published author who had been writing for years. Bravo, bravo.
Now, setting aside the formalities, I have to laugh at the dark sense of humor you layered carefully in there. Morbid, yet strangely amusing... Oh, and love the first list of names you put in. I'm guessing Ralph, Zach, Joseph, and Mark are other peeps you know.
~The one and only Bob Evans
| MKaori chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
OMG. That was spooky. Lucy is definitely nuts but I thought schizophrenia meant a split personality. As if you're fighting or talking with yourself. Anyways, good work at creating a convincing, positively cuckoo character. I never managed it...