|Reviews for not at all like paco|
| Seraphim chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I feel like I read this in a book before. This exact same story. Did you have this published?
| Green Dye chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
M. I like this. I should read more sci-fi.
One thing I especially liked was the dust bunnies. Usually I get all tied in knots and make faces whenever a story describes aliens, because so much of the time it seems they're mostly humanoid, or just generally too similar to the life forms we're used to and not really alien at all.
The dust bunnies take on human voice and shape, sure, but the concept of them is pretty neat. The fact that they live peacefully with the colonizers is pretty unique, for sure.
Thanks for a good read.
| moongazer7 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Could you perhaps describe your characters in more detail? What their background is like and what they look like.
| frogs of war chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
I think I liked it, but I also think it should go through a spell checker (renenber). It it Binsome, Binsorne or both?
| Shriken chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
I like this.:)
| Cattails chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I really enjoyed this I'm rather fond of this dust-bunny business XD The set-up of the world is fascinating, and I loved the writing style. But, I always love your writing style XD Plus the bittersweet tone worked well.
| and we'll dance chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Hey, thanks for your review! I don't know what that show is, but now I want to check it out.
I really like your writing. The style seems so familiar, it's as if I've read it somewhere before, so that's going to bother me, lol. But I really liked this!
Thanks again for your review
| the Berserker chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
I like the way you only describe certain things. I like the craziness. I don't think you used enough commas.
It's wonderful :)
| Kneecap chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Right, well, first off, I'd like to apologise for having taken so long to review this, I've been bsut lately, sorry :S.
BUT! I'm not really very good with reviews, but I can say that I thought this was spectacular. And moving and very, very sad.
I really felt for Sandy, it's such a shame that Paco died.
And I LOVED the environment and setting in this! I'm not really much of a sci-fi fan, but it was really great, and I loved the use of colours.
I didn't really understand parts of it though, like what "the feelers" really were. :S. As I say, my knowledge of sci-fi is pretty shoddy, but I still thought this was fantastic! . Go you!