Reviews for Battlefield Downpour
lymli chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
wow, this part makes me think

But not even the grandest ray

Can keep the explosions from living again.

life is wonderful, and the things about the sun, explosions were strong,
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Sounds just like our weather right now. ;) Anyway, I liked the comparisons you drew here to a battlefield. Nicely done )
ticktockman chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
catchy title and an interesting veiw on rain, nice job, I am favoriting this one.
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
It has been raining most of the week, so I can definitely relate at this time.

I really like how you describe the sun here - 'It comes to quell the battlefield'. Very nicely said, because that's just the way it is if you think about it. (: