|Reviews for Testing Grounds|
| Insomiak chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
I love shit like this. The DAY ZERO was cool.
| lucid-psyche chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
I never thought that I would say this, but you need to expand it. You can keep it as a short, but it still needs a little more.
Why would the "Day zero" be after the rest of the recording?
Also, if it's a recording, why would he say "Day ?" I think you need to decide if it's a written journal (where he would use question marks) or a recording (where he would state the day).
How was the recording found?
You've got a good foundation; build on it. (And by the way, I like the MSGINBTTLE program name ;).)
| OceanLeviathan chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Nice, a bit...er gruesome but a clever idea. Shame you're not continuing this