|Reviews for God is Not Dead Yet|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Interesting piece. I like the sound in it, how you use that to both get your message across and to expand the piece. Very nice job. Keep writing! :)
| Vampyre of the Varg chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Wonderful. One spectacular line after another. :)
| mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
The first line was what really got in me interested, while the rest of it made my brow furrow quite nicely like good poetry should. Honestly, I thought this was great. I was very impressed with the vocabulary you used (very well!) and how you broke apart the lines in the stanzas.
This was a great poem. I love the first line, it said it all, really. The rest of the poem made me think of these girls at my school, not really sure why though. Well, the word "slut" might've helped a bit.
Honestly, this piece was one of the best ones I've read so far. And I've read a lot of poetry on this site in the last year or two. I like the angry tone to this. I think the tone is really what kept me interested the whole way through, if it wasn't the rhythm or the imagery.
I'll add it to my C2 and someday it might make it to my iPod, if I ever get around to it.