Reviews for the story of kaitlyn's girl
Twilight Starr chapter 11 . 6/23/2008
Great addition. What else can I say?

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 15 . 6/23/2008
Great addition. I like all the show of the insecurities. Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 10 . 6/13/2008
Great addition.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 9 . 6/13/2008
Wonderful job on description. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 8 . 6/13/2008
Ahh! It made me want to throw up. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 7 . 6/13/2008
Amazing job. You really get into character.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 6 . 6/13/2008
I think you want an apostophe in "teachers". Nice work. The last line was haunting.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 5 . 6/13/2008
Nice addition.

Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~
KatieTheWriter chapter 12 . 6/10/2008
Oh wow, I can relate to this. It's always about dieting, getting to your goal weight by that holiday or vacation, feeling better in your skin. Thanks for writing this. It's really well written.

Oh, and I saw your profile and it says you like Metro Station. Awesome! I just saw them in concert and I'm seeing them again next month. Mason walked by me and my sister and we called out to him. We saw Trace up close with his girlfriend Hanna Beth. We also met The Maine. Anyway, that's off subject.

So, just to let you know, I read the whole thing, but I thought this chapter reached out to me the most. BMI. Damn...I hate those stupid charts! Why do they put them on the internet? It just messes with girl's heads. :(

What sucks is starving messes up the metabolism. EDs are tough. Good job with this. Really.

ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 4 . 5/14/2008
katrina, dammit. your words, always so pretty and alluring. its no damn wonder i love you girl. jesus. you will so be publishing this, so i can buy my copy and like spazz out. haha. anyway, i love it, and i love you.
Twilight Starr chapter 4 . 5/13/2008
Wonderful work. Waiting for more.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 3 . 5/13/2008
Amazing addition. Five stars! Incredibly believable.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 2 . 5/13/2008
This is very realistically written. You express emotions well. Great job!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Interesting prologue of sorts. The title has me interested. Nice work. :D Have an awesome day.

~Twilight Starr~
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 3 . 5/11/2008
my god, k. im soo like, proud. you finally started the in verse project that we kinda, threw around for nano last year. i love it too, its amazing. very raw and powerful voice you have my dear. keep it up. maybe somewhere in the journey, you'll be able to shut kaitlyn up-forever. i love you dear.
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