|Reviews for Shadow's Glare|
| BookOfSpells chapter 3 . 6/9/2008
I like it but I got confused...
| BookOfSpells chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
I really like it! I guess it would b have to read more though.
| misery sister chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Okay. You want to capture your reader's attention on the first line, make them want to like the story. If your first line says "I DONT' KNOW WHAT I'M WRITING", what do you think your reader will think? It makes them not want to read it. Happened to me - I just wanted to tell you so.