|Reviews for Beach Trash|
| Yasona Black chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
aw, that was cute. cut adorable breakup, almost movie-like except the girl actually leaves the guy. woohoo! I loved the whole beach bits with the jellyfish and the clams. I think the poem might be more powerful, if you didn't repeat "I laughed the whole way home." However, it's your decision, and I think you are an amazing writer.