Reviews for Lovelicious
iloveanimecartoons chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Okay, that's got me Kool-Aid smiling! The euphoria of SERIOUSLY crushing/realizing love is so...mushy, sweet, happy, whimsical, special, goofy, happy, sappy...LOVELY. That's what i got out of this poem. And to a HAPPILY SINGLE chick like myself, for a poem to remind me of all those past emotions, it's got potential! MAD potential! New fav!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
I like the play on words with lovelicious, it's cute and funny and fits will with the chocolate and recipe thing.

it seems I like you/before I liked chocolate/now I like chocolate and you.. that sounded a bit weird, sorry. I mean had you never tried chocolate? Had you not liked it and then changed your mind? Or were you trying to say you liked him forever? I dunno it confused me.

I wish the last line was food oriented, it would fit better, but it's still really well done... nice job.

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The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
This made me smile. Simple, short and sweet. I like how you describe emotions, and how you wrote the situation of the children. I liked how you presented the theme and everything was so great about this poem! You should write more like this!

The Reverse Edge Blade
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Very cute!

XKristie MarieX