Reviews for Mannequin
J.N. Lloyd chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Whoa, this poem is very deep. I really enjoyed the metaphors and the style of your writing is simply astounding. I enjoyed this poem. Write more.
Solstice Of Light chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
You really are very mean to men in your poems :huff: but still, it's good :)

First line second stanza: "She'll dance just HOW you like it" Might be better :)

burnyourlifedown chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Beautifully written.