Such sweet simplicity and beauty. I particularly like "slip silently". Nice work!

wow, this was really good! I love the use of the word "slip" and the way it just... flows. "waking waves" and "slip silently" both sound awesome even if you didn't do it on purpose. you really create a moment with this piece!

i really like the imagery of this. the verb choices really emphasize it.

I like the imagery of the waves simply slipping over the sun!

Keep up the good work!

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Quite interesting picture you draw in this poem! I love the use of "slip" which makes it more unusual in this context. Good work!