Sad but beautiful all the same (

He saw her but didn’t think much of it.

- Aww, terrible!

She would haunt him.

- love how you ended it ]

It's scary what teenagers can do these days:(

hm i think this is getting around as a chain. I think i've gotten it as a chain :D

this is sad! my heart ache a little when I reached the end. Short and very sweet!

I love it! With the short sentences and everything, it was really touching.

x Hils

i loved it. it was simple, and really touching.

kind of confusing, when you described what she was doing, and in the next line, what he was doing, but still great.

i loved the underlined part. it really is true, and you showed that really well with your story.

keep it up

...Wow. O.O I wasn't expecting such short sentences, so it was a little weird for me, but I really enjoyed reading that. It was sad... FAV!

I love the simplicity of your story. With short sentences, the message was able to some across to the reader. Hence, GREAT JOB! LOVE IT!