Reviews for He doesn't notice
WishBlade chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Sad but beautiful all the same (
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
He saw her but didn’t think much of it.

- Aww, terrible!

She would haunt him.

- love how you ended it ]
annoyance chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
It's scary what teenagers can do these days:(
thesupernaturalwhiz chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
hm i think this is getting around as a chain. I think i've gotten it as a chain :D
sQuee.i chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
this is sad! my heart ache a little when I reached the end. Short and very sweet!
Hils chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
I love it! With the short sentences and everything, it was really touching.

x Hils
MySunshine chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
i loved it. it was simple, and really touching.

kind of confusing, when you described what she was doing, and in the next line, what he was doing, but still great.

i loved the underlined part. it really is true, and you showed that really well with your story.

keep it up
Lin Butcher chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
...Wow. O.O I wasn't expecting such short sentences, so it was a little weird for me, but I really enjoyed reading that. It was sad... FAV!
GodHelpUsAll chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I love the simplicity of your story. With short sentences, the message was able to some across to the reader. Hence, GREAT JOB! LOVE IT!