Reviews for Imagine
centenarian chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
This was brilliant..captivating. I could feel quite clearly the pain in the poem and the wish that everything could be different. It's very powerful yet sad. Keep it up.
Isca chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
So, I'm officially crying after reading this. Thank you for dedicating this to me! Thank you for being such an amazing writer! "Imagine if it was me, not the fear, that stole your breath away." I don't even know what to say. I'm deeply touched, moved, and captivated by this.
person is gone chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Wow, beautiful and sad. It's wonderfully expressed. I love the line:

"When it finally does, will you dissolve and

Will I decay?"

and especially this one: "If it was me, not the fear, that stole your breath away."

Wow.

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