Reviews for The Sapphire Rose
kajdhgfwuyejhdgf chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
It was bittersweet but very good.
Chris Gibson chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
wow. This story is amazing and sweet. It flows just like an old legend or a fairytale from a book. Good job and keep up the good work!
Birdi-V chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
this was great! I loved the detail you put into it! And what could the condition have been? How mysterious...
misery sister chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
[...nails that were longer that her arm.]


I like how you use third person, so it's like we're reading a real fairytale. And your use of words helps this theme you have going of a fairytale you tell to your kid when in bed.

Although, I think you could have added a bit more mystique when it came to her meeting the gargoyles. You should add a bit more anticipation and tension in the air - and also, as the story neared its end, it didn't hold the same story-like feel to it anymore. It sort of... dwindled. But it was entertaining.
Ash Algood chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
i liked it, there was alot of detail but i dont get the ending nd u never specified what the old gargoyle was going to say but all in all it was pretty entertaining