Reviews for opposites attract
painted eyes chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
I LOVE the last lines! It makes a really good twist to the poem! Keep up the good work!

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Cloverless chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Ohh. Those last three lines are cold (in a good way). I actually felt my heart reach down, and beat my own kidneys into submission, it was so bittersweet.

Very well done; those last three lines turn it from a cutesy pomm, into a powerful one.