Reviews for Collide
brokencrystal7 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
its short but it has a lot of feeling to it. i can totally relate to it
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
I like the Howie Day reference 'cause I like that song. I also like this piece because the ending wasn't what I expected. I like the format too, though I would put a comma after the third line not a period.

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ScarletDreamer chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
I can definitely relate to this! While a simple poem, it speaks loud and clear. Though we may love someone else, we may not like who we become when we are with them.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 5/17/2008

to the point.

lack of self confidence, don't we all doubt?

good job, keep writing
fallenflame13 chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Short, sweet, to the point. Good job!
Jennifer chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
This was awesome! It was simply perfect.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Why? explanations are needed for poems this short! _

XKristie MarieX
casi chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
so simple, and so sad.

you may hate you

but i love you


see you tomorrow