|Reviews for Muranger: Recollections|
| DefineBeauty chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
o, this sounds like the start of a great story! from what you have, it leaves the reader wanting for more. it sounds like it could be a mystery or action type story, whatever it is, it sounds like its gonna be good ]
i think you use words well in this story, they describe vividly, make you feel like you're actually there
as of now my only complaint is that i dont know what the prayer says! lol
| Sexy Vampirechick chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
I liked the desciptive adjectives you used. It was very I must say I didn't really get what you author's note was telling me. Were you trying to say this is a preview of your story as in the little pieces you find at the back of books or did you mean it's related to a 'real' story itself and you're just changing parts so this is the first?
I didn't really liked the change of language in the I'm Catholic and I saw Jesus Christ,I guess it's in Italian? Maybe you should use a more universal language like or something.
But all in all, this story was interesting.I'd read more when you update!