|Reviews for Nowhere Feet|
| mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
This one is much calmer than the few others I've read that you've written.
I like the rhythm and the rhyming pattern; it was really subtle until I started to think about it and look for it. This flowed really well. The descriptions were really unique, especially the last line. I like "nowhere feet." It makes no sense to me when I actually think it through, which actually makes me smile.
This was a really good piece.