Reviews for The first angel
xxCassidyVictoriaxx chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Great poem. I loved the lines 'Beauty isn't always the pretty things/when you cry so much until you have tear no more/the only option is... smile.'
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
The ending was double spaced for some reason.

I like this. It's sweet... a bit cliched at the end, but still full of emotions.
AshleyTerra chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
I really enjoyed your imagery. I don't know if you intended to so, but the '...' made it seem more thoughtful and the font made it seem more dream like.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
that was a very good story. told in verse too. I thought it was bittersweet. keep writting!
illusionistic chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
like the overall idea you have going on here, and you go through with it well. (:

might wanna take a look at some of your grammar, though.

'his clothing were tore'
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
This is truly one of the most beautiful things i've ever read. Great job! adding to favs!

xKristie Mariex