Reviews for I Stand for the American Flag
KeepMovingForward chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
I love this! It's simple and true! Good work!
Imalefty chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
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i totally agree. :) i love this poem for that reason.

i like the descriptions... they're cliched but true. :) there's a lot of enthusiasm in here... which is really nice. :)

i wish you'd expanded just a bit... just so that there would be more love for the flag. XD

keep writing!

-Lefty
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
True are it’s red, white, and blue... the phrasing of this seemed a bit forced in order to get the rhyme

I kinda wanted more from this piece like why do you stand for the American flag is it just because youre American or is there something else? I just wanted more. I did like what was there though, other than that one part the rhyming was good and the repetition worked well.

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MSKDphantom chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
God bless America