I love this! It has everything I adore! Family! Dragons! *flails*

Very time I read it I love it more, would love to read more about Weida and young Lahore. Would love to buy the book.

That was a sweet story , I love the fact the Edmund was his father's son. You always see the main person wanting to be a hero while Edmund is already happy. He is a very admirable character :) and even more as he is just 12.

Excellent story. I really do love dragons. This story, though short, makes me smile.

Nice Story

I've started exploring more of your library, and once again i have found a beautiful story.

I loved it, I got caught up in both the charecters and story and could hardly put it down. I was still curious about the dragon society and its intricacies, but felt that plenty enough was covered to support the story. Time to see what other stories you've writen. :)

This was a very interesting adventure that made may day, thank you for offering us this great piece of your imagination!

Not bad, not bad at all. this story was written well, easy to read and follow, overall a good story.

Absolutely delightful. I love the characters, especially the way many of them take in events naturally and in stride, with their own personality, along with a kind of cool aplomb. The detail of Edmund learning dragonspeech was most endearing to me.
Lovely story. Just the right amount of development and backstory for its length. Fantastic work.

What a wonderful story. This should be published for the teen market. Thank you for sharing your story with a 61yo teen. :-)

probably the most amazing thing to this piece it that you've flawlessly achieved to tie real life with fantasy. As far as i've seen, alot of modern dragons had been given the antagonist script so it's kinda heartwarming to see a change to that, another amazing feat.

at some times it the story felt cut short to me, there could have been much happier endings or atleast a bonus short chapter but still the ending was adequate, i couldn't ask for anything better. it left my mind busy even weeks after i've read this, thinking of the possibilities.

another thing is that the way how you've portrayed the dragon culture to detailed and unique has given me a whole new perspective on them.

seriously, it's a breathtaking piece besides the fact that it leaves you in tears at the end, but that's a part of it and i certainly enjoyed it. i'm really grateful that you've put your time and effort into this. you did a really astounding job!

What a fitting end for a wonderful story! I absolutely loved it!

Extremely well done. Kudos. Is nit too much to ask for a sequel?

I really like this story. It has a simple elegance to it that I truly enjoy. There is real work on the characters, the plot & the world it's built in. :)