Reviews for Lonely Alone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story, I liked it. Were you basing it off Pink's song "Leave Me Alone (I'm Lonely)"? Just curious. Anyway, it was good :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your way of asking for a review was funny. So here it is. I really liked the story. But it seems Ryan has some...trust issues. I thought it was very amusing. I also like Claire, the purple-haired, melon lip-gloss wearing individualist. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaah i like this, its different from all the typical "oneshots" :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. Not really resolved, but cute. It feels like there's more to the story though... |
![]() ![]() ![]() was this a Covenant fic? I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this was really good. I like it you should do a longer story like this if you already haven't. Spelling and grammer were good too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful! love it! good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah, it was awesome! excuse me while I get a drink of milk to cool down LOL |
![]() ![]() This is a nice piece of one-shot. Ryan is a pretty needy guy. hahaha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And I shall feed you some reviews! :D I liked it very much, I say! :D I like how she's independent and all, but she's not denying that she cares for him, you know? She's not like those "You mean nothing to me" independent girls... |
![]() ![]() ![]() A couple spelling errors, but cute. I'm guessing a notorious player has fallen for a Goth? of all people? Seems kind of an epilogue. Maybe you could write what exactly happened between them in those last seven months? |