|Reviews for Someone Else|
| Tipped chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
i really like the internal rhyming scheme you carry out through the first three stanzas. the first stanza i especially liked, i think because of the phrasing of the thoughts.
nothing in this poem seems particularly forced; its very natural. i would say perhaps avoid cliches, however they are not quite so prominent in your poem, because of how you convey your thoughts
very nice :)
| Sexy Vampirechick chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
I liked your words were not forced and therefore makes the poem much more powerful.
I like how you seperate each stanza with each topic revolving around the main idea. Very nice!
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
that's how I feel too; and it's hardly been a year. way to put it in words.