I felt like this chapter was kind of sudden,

but the descriptions were good; graphical.

I loved the ending.

This sounds interesting, I'm going to keep reading. :)

When Alex said “I can’t stand him, and I haven’t ever met him.”

Was it meant to be, "I haven't even met him." ?

Again, really good. I like how you relate to other teens so well in your writing.

Really good! Kind of typical, but extremely well written. Can't wait to read more!

I really like this story and I hope that you can continue soon. Thanks for the alert.