Reviews for Drifting
brokencrystal7 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
i am going to keep it simple and start to the point.


please come and read my poems and stories. i would love to know what you think of them
deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
Very interesting, I like the style of this one. Keep up the good work, and sorry I havent had time to review for a while.
Mourning Sickness chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Stark, with a slightly dark feel and the nice touch of ambiguity.

Very well done.
Manifest-Destiny-x X chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
This made perfect sense to me!

Beautiful and surreal

4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Sometimes dreams are for dreaming the impossible... Easy to read, yet confusing and awesome. Keep writing!
Ezio. The Sentinel chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Dreams are for dreaming, yes. But, Nightmares aren't for the sole purpose of scaring you. Easy flow, as well as an easy read. Very almost surreal, I suppose one would call it.

Jennifer chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
I think that this is the only one of yours that I just completely don't get. I don't care if I don't understand it, it's still beautiful.

Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
The voice in this works well to connect the reader with the situation. I like how you've universalized the emotion while staying true to the tone of individualization. Well written.
Rock Music is my Muse chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Very confusing. . .

But then again, does any of your stuff make much sense?