|Reviews for Monsters|
| Dark Maelstrom chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
This story is already pretty cool even though much truly hasn't happened yet. I'm gonna stick with this, you seem to be going in a unique direction. In turn, can you please review my stories, especially Lupus, my first real story? I think you would like it from what you write.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Interesting beginning (interesting in a good way). Nice work. Keep writing!
Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.
| Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Nice, it seems like a pretty good story, I like the way you write. Update soon.
| Luna Nightraven chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
I'm not much of one for monster and vampire stories, but I thought I'd give this a try since I enjoy your fanfiction. The idea of a smallish town not close to anything and surrounded by even smaller towns reminds me somewhat of where I'm originally from. Not much happening yet, but that's understandable since it's only the prologue.
I found part of one sentence to be worded a little awkwardly.
"But it creeps out a little to the rest of us, so..."
I'm assuming you meant something like, "But it creeps us out a little, so..."
I'm looking forward to seeing how the plot unfolds and if it turns out any better than the vampire/werewolf/monster slop I've attempted to read in the past.
Good luck with the story!
| gallowsCalibrator chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Good start for a story. Cant wait for you to update!