Reviews for shedding
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Oh, this is beautiful. I see why you have it linked in your profile. I did that with my favorite piece. Really, I can't pick out any one line that I like because they're all gorgeous. Lovely work. Keep writing! :)
rage of aquarius chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
This is beautiful. It speaks to me in strangely familiar ways, as though my soul had been guiding you when you wrote it. Odd, no? "shedding, learn the flaw/and love her/whole, like there is/no reason to believe/the boundaries of before" is like falling in love with someone, her, you, me, myself. Anything and anyone. It reminds me of something someone once wrote about me, which is more romantic than the phrase itself conveys, and which is something I based an entire story off: "Goddamn it, liberate."
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
The imagery in this was amazing, especially in the last stanza. Really really powerful and beautiful, i like the description of trying to find your identity, i often feel confused about my own so this poem really emphasized the struggles of that. A new favourite. I loved it.