I adore this.

It short, yet extremely effective.

And beautiful, though sad.

It just explains a lot with only those few lines.

i love how this opens up a whole little world, especially with that last line, even though its so short. Nice work!

o_O

...That was epic. Thumbs up for you.

Sadness! D:

I liked it though, very emotive.

i loved this! this was really straightforward & i like that. no beating around the bush. i especially liked the summary-"She kept her head held high by the noose around her neck." is that creepy? lol! (:

Haunting...

I really like this, i cant really explain why. Its verry good.

:)

Shit... this was blunt with emotional honesty, but I liked it. Short but effective; I loved the impact ensnared by the last line.

-T.S.