Reviews for Goodbye
H.Satrio chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
I've been down this lane a couple times before. It's not easy and I tell you want, writing it really helps. I like your honest emotions in this poem. The reader can really feel the emotions. Thanks for the share and remember that there's always a tomorrow :)
L. Lazuli chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
Sad. it's always hard to say goodbye.. i, too had just said goodbye to someone special recently. hurts like hell. but move on..

this piece has the air of grievance. every line contains [the author's] sadness; wanting to stop everything that's happening but unable to do so. thanks for reviewing btw.

best of luck to you.

Carpe Diem.

-llazuli-
Courtney chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
I really enjoyed this poem... not a lot of people understand when a relationship goes wrong because both sides want to be martyrs...I loved it
lilyme chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
Ah, yes, I so feel like that too...

That was really good!
Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
i love this piece right to the very end. sorry i haven't reviewed in a while. been busy lately. goow work