Reviews for The Bottom of the Bowl
DasRebell chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Hey I love onions! ;-D

This is a really great poem, I love how it explores the caste system in a different way rather than being all straight foward and un metaphoric.

I love it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
I like this piece because it is just so creative. I can't imagine coming up with such an awesome piece because of a salad. I especially love the second stanza because the descriptions of the jobs of the different parts of the salad were just so interesting.

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Imalefty chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
straight from the review marathon! (link in profile)

hahaha, this is good. it's definitely a good description of a salad - i like the last stanza. poor onions. XD

i can see how this could be in the "politics" section, though it does seem just a little out of place. XD

and i really like how you put it under "angst." so funny. XD

i thought the breaks were a little weird... i don't think you need full xoxoxo breaks between each one, but that's just formatting.

anyway, great job. keep writing!

-Lefty
Rock Music is my Muse chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
Beautifully done. Amazing job.
annanonymous chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Beautiful. I loved it!
emmaliefje chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
Very cool. Who could ever ever ever have related politics and salad but you? Seriously. Very creative!