Reviews for Sugar Lips
xLittleBlackConverse chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
This was intense, but I wished it had a little more of a story to it because I found it interesting. But hey, it's a oneshot. I'm already poofing up a happy ending for them in my mind ]

Good work though!

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4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
Wow I'm always so amazed by your work. Very emotional and beautifully written. Awesome job!
Jennifer chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
That was really good. I liked it. I just wish I had more of a background to it. It's written very well. You should write more of these!

OH!

That verdana story? It ain't a poem. I forgot. It's a story I wrote. But it ain't on here. PM if you really want to read it.

-Jennifer.
Eve's Deception chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
it did work.

theres something really pretty about this...

but overall its just really sweet

and the ending just makes you want more
Rock Music is my Muse chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Wow, you actually writing a real story.

I, for one, am shocked.

Anyway, I relly liked the beginning. Very emotional.