Reviews for Sex Cells
Never Going Back chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
oh my god i love this!
mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
I like the repition of the lines "Are we nothing?" and "As we're pushed to our knees." It kept the poem together and made it work really well. I especially liked the last two lines of the first stanza.

This piece has really nice flow and rhythm to it. I like how you concluded with two very strong questions and then "Are we nothing?" again.

Very nice piece.

-stix-
self-indulgence chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
holy sh!t that was awesome