Reviews for If God Makes The Water Hot
stained blue chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
it feels like it lacks something,

i don't know what but i still love it;

it feels so powerful.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
i rather like the overall sense of... strangeness, i guess. the idea of judges spitting and flying and God making the water hot

lends the poem originality. i can't really tell what it's about, but the words sound good in the way you've arranged them. especially love the first line; very evocative imagery. nice job.

-adrian, from the review marathon (link in my profile).