Reviews for Night time Blessing
Militant-Antibody chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
I love how it flows. You have some redundant phrases("softly lightly tread") that brought my attention away from the poem as a whole, and some repetition that I could find much meaning in(repeating "lie down now" with "lay you down" the next stanza). But that makes me sound like I didn't enjoy it, cause it is a pretty good lullaby, with a tune it could be nice to sing.
Massiel chapter 1 . 8/9/2002
I really liked it. You took something very simple and made it your own. You really show talent.
vic romeo chapter 1 . 1/20/2002
Andy: Queen Mab is also mentioned in Shakespears' Romeo and Juliet. Mercutio *Romeo's best friend* makes a speech about her just before they go to the Capulet's party. Very good!
empty account chapter 1 . 7/16/2001
This would make an excellent lulluby.
Ragdoll chapter 1 . 4/18/2001
this is really sweet :) Its nice to think of the dark as sort of cormforting.. rather than sinister or anything.. you truly are one of my favourite writers and you review my stuff... love ya battykat! :) xxx (hehe i dunno ur real name)