|Reviews for Sniper|
| Tawny Owl chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Liked the set up at the beginning. The way you drop hints that everything is quite what it appears by making references to silver.
"Better not to stop her yet,” I knew what you meant but it seemed a bit clunky. Just nit picking though.
The twist at the end was good as well. The lengthing of Ty's teeth lets you know that he isn't all he appears either - and thne the revelation that the woman he is hunting created him. It was good because it gave the story more focus than it simply being about hunting - if that makes sense?
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
It looks like Ty got his man or woman in this case. Well described. Keep up the good work.
| misery sister chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
Hey! This wasn't bad! I mean, seriously, I've been reading and reviewing a lot of crap recently - and this was very refreshing! :)