Liked the set up at the beginning. The way you drop hints that everything is quite what it appears by making references to silver.

"Better not to stop her yet,” I knew what you meant but it seemed a bit clunky. Just nit picking though.

The twist at the end was good as well. The lengthing of Ty's teeth lets you know that he isn't all he appears either - and thne the revelation that the woman he is hunting created him. It was good because it gave the story more focus than it simply being about hunting - if that makes sense?

It looks like Ty got his man or woman in this case. Well described. Keep up the good work.

~SirScott

Hey! This wasn't bad! I mean, seriously, I've been reading and reviewing a lot of crap recently - and this was very refreshing! :)