Reviews for Adam's Apple
bohotea chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
That was just a beautiful piece and was just touching! To put it simply - I LOVED IT!

Keep writing :)
Fragile Things chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
omg! this was absolutely positively one of the best writings i have ever read! i am astonished at the depth of your mind. jealousy curls in my stomach and yet i am lost in my awe...
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
love this to pieces. wonderful descriptions.
Autumn's Last Curse chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Love the marriage between the biblical and the sinful. The imagery is both simple and intricate, drawing you in through your memories, and locking you out, because you're not part of this. Superb. I love it.

The only thing I would change would be the spilled orange juice part, since it brings a discordant touch of reality to something otherwise so ephemeral.
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
I love how you structured this as a prose/poetry paragraph. It flowed so smoothly and the imagery was just great. :D