Man I could totally imagine the sweet kiss inside the bakery. It's so fluffy to see this cliche. I still don't get tired of best friends turned lovers thing.

Haha, I love this! Great job :D

cute, but more please

Aww! I loved it! And your right, I have put my name in the search engine a good 5 times...

haha. I like this. And you're right, this non-cliche. There's no "oh-my-god-I'm-in-love-with-my-best-friend-and-I'm-only-a-friend-to-him-so-I-gotta-bawl-my-eyes-out"

xD Not that I'm saying that I don't like that kind of story. But, this one's different and that makes it good.

Awww! Cute!

This was an ending that left me on the edge of my seat with unanswered questions rambling around my head. Excellent touch!

Hey! I am here to share some exciting news! This story has been added to the One Shot category over on A Drop of Romeo!

Here's the review:

"Helen Thinks: When you see the name EruptingFender9 on a story, you know you’re in for a treat and this is delivered through the wonderful story that is “Still Employed”.

Despite being the girl and best friend angle, this story is far from cliché. Our male lead, Scott, is at work in a bakery that is desolate at that day so he makes a phone call to his best friend, Cameron, pleading with her to come keep him company or he’s going to strangle himself. Like with any best friends, they have some cute times that helps Cameron realise that she’s been experiencing feelings that you wouldn’t usually put under the category of friendship.

Do you know what was amazing about this story? Yes, there are a lot of fantastic concepts such as realistic characters that we probably could recognise in our own friendship circles if we looked for them, dialogue that made you smile along as well as a beautiful amount of narration that keeps the reader aware of what’s happening but my favourite part was the end. Obviously I am not going to tell you what happens, because I expect you’ll all hunt me down and kill me for such a spoiler alert, but EruptingFender9 has shown an audience how to correctly end a story that allows the audience to feel captivated for hours after they have finished reading. It was cute, quirky and a hundred per cent original."

Keep writing,

Helen xo

i like how you ended it, it was fitting:) good writing, once again!

I absolutely loved that this wasn't a cliche. Really enjoyed reading this, great job :D

Hi, again. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo and I'm falling in love with your work! "Still Employed" has been added to ADoR. Here's your raving review:

This author is extremely talented with one-shots and short stories. The ending to this one (which I'm not going to give away, I promise) is perfect. It's not cliche. It's original and cute. EruptingFender9 gets major brownie points for that. As I've said, I'm definitely nominating her for Best Breakout Author at SKoW in the winter.

XOXO,

Juliet

I'm kinda happy you ended it like this. And I also love the last line. And I could totally imagine the boss yelling when you wrote it.

Love the story!

~*~Ngoc1231~*~

Lovely story as always.

I love how it didn't end with a dramatic fight, make up, and kiss.

The subtle ending was wonderful.

More!

nice oneshot. scott's brave.