Reviews for The Introspective Debate of Owen Brody
joefiction chapter 2 . 9/2/2018
You don't always separate your dialogue paragraphs by character and it can be confusing.

...Brody had looked over the main area and shrugged. "Shit, she was my ride," he grumbled.

It takes to the next paragraph to guess that the response would be coming from another person, so Brody didn't say it. It's like you are trying to create suspense about who said what. I didn't like that. I went against how things are normally written.
joefiction chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
seem very comfortable with writing. Unlike lots of other people you are not afraid to write sentences that use a semicolon. Actually, you use lots of different punctuation people usually don't such as dashes and ellipses.

2. I agree with someones comment that, the changing of the percentage numbers added to the story.

3. Just want to write something to acknowledge I read the first chapter and to practice what kinds of things to say as comments. I am moving forward to chapter 2 now...
Aly chapter 22 . 8/16/2016
One of the best fic I've ever read. Thank you for the feels !
1113brooke chapter 22 . 3/18/2014
This story is a gem. I'm surprised that I hadn't come across it until now, but I'm very glad I have. Very sweet and well written.
NineSoul chapter 22 . 7/4/2013
Hi there. :)
This is an awesome story. It's full of just the right kind of feels, all different colors and flavors and, although I wasn't sure at first, I think this is brilliant. Just thought you ought to know. ;)

NineSoul
SongHasSung chapter 22 . 4/20/2013
Wow... Just love this story!
Au chapter 22 . 10/27/2012
Awwww that ending was too cute I stayed up 'till 2 am just to finish reading this amazing story. I really liked Brody's personality and how he didn't care what others thought about him. I'm not really good at reviewing so I'm gonna stop now (")
Encore19 chapter 22 . 10/23/2012
This story is fantastic! My number one favourite so far! Good job :D
Encore19 chapter 13 . 9/26/2012
I love this story!
Encore19 chapter 5 . 9/22/2012
You're an amazing writer!
Encore19 chapter 2 . 9/21/2012
*drools*
Encore19 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
You're a very talented writer, I will keep reading this.
tangledoctopus chapter 3 . 7/10/2012
Hey , I liked the story so far ..

but I want to ask something

Do you read Chuck Palahniuk ? Your style reminded me of him a bit :]
Anonymous Romeo chapter 5 . 6/23/2012
I am loving this story a lot :D You make it hard to close my laptop and go to bed hahahaha :D I will continue to read tomorrow...get ready for your upcoming flood of reviews :) cause you just won another follower :)
OnTheFlipSide chapter 22 . 5/29/2012
THIS! I love it so freaking much. It's amazing and by far my favorite story I've ever read! GREAT JOB!
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