Reviews for The Introspective Debate of Owen Brody
Carus chapter 5 . 7/13/2008
Hi i read this story this morning and i felt guilty about not leaving a review, so here it is! I just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed reading this story, it was really good, especially showing the relationship between Brody and his mum. Well done!
aishling-stone chapter 22 . 7/13/2008
I just discovered this story as I was poking through the YA section and read it all tonight. Excellent job. Brody's voice comes through very nicely, and I loved the percentages. x3
Chasmodai Blue chapter 22 . 7/12/2008
Sequel! Sequel!

I don't know. The ending sucked less than some of the others I've seen in my day.

I liked it.
three pipes chapter 22 . 7/12/2008
Aw. Happy ending.

No comments, really- it was kind of abrupt, but it was sweet enough to be worth it. Poor Mia... but oh, well. She'll get over it. She was probably my favorite character, to be honest.

Anyway. Well done, indeed. Applause.
freakofnature17 chapter 22 . 7/11/2008
Lot's of drama, but an adorable ending. i applaud you.
Guatemalan Rocker chikk chapter 22 . 7/11/2008
i read this freakin story in the course of 1.5 DAYS! [yesterday night and for the past...2 hours?]

and i LOVED it!

woo!

haha :)

ok...thats all i needed to say...

i hope theres a sequel!
Siberian-Tigress chapter 22 . 7/10/2008
Aw! I hope you write a sequal, I've found myself falling in love with your characters.

ST
Indalecio chapter 22 . 7/10/2008
omg its over! NO~ *sigh* i geuss all good things must come to and end. I loved it *hugs* this was an awesome story!
knits alot chapter 22 . 7/10/2008
I thought this chapter was one of your best. Don't kick yourself anymore. I'm just sad the story is over.
Jecori chapter 21 . 7/10/2008
Wow! I absolutely LOVE how you twist things around so perfectly! Nothing got ruined whatsoever, and as always, this put a great big smile on my face. This chappe has got to be one of my faves. It's just that the mood that you created among them is so contagious!

I guess this proves I like happy stuff more than serious stuff..

Pfft anyway

Lovely descriptions you have in this one. Not too lengthy, but just enough to created a good picture of everything that's happening.

And yes, you're right. I love Brody's mom, a LOT now. :D

So you're moving? That sucks. Especially close to the start of school. Just last year I had to move 2 weeks after school started. Which also really sucked. Good luck with the move!
Jecori chapter 20 . 7/10/2008
Haha! Gotta love those percents ;)

Good chapter on background stuff. The emotions were controlled well and I like how he opens up to Mia.
friend 49 chapter 22 . 7/10/2008
DON'T LIE LIKE THAT.

I REALLY LIKED BREAKING BAILEY.

):

Does this mean I am no one to you?

Gonna go cry now. Be back later...

):

OKAY BACK.

"“Linden,” he answered clearly, “Linden Harrow, Carpview chapter.” Shelby rolled her eyes and moved on."

Heehehehehehe I love Brody!

"Brody swept that mumbling boy into his arms and kissed his cheek."

Eek so cute!

"Mia wouldn’t know her way around Morris High."

Detective Brody: 1 Alyssa: 0

):

"“He’s seeing Linden like I’m seeing you,” she hotly finished. “He’s doing anything he can to be anywhere near Linden, because it’s gotten so bad like a sickness and he can’t not see him. As much as I hate the guy for freaking leading him on, I know exactly what he feels because...it’s what I feel for you.”"

No. ):

"Both of them turned to see his goofy grin, the one that had been on his face ever since Michael had picked him up that evening. It made Brody a little sick inside to see it."

That's reallyreallyreally sad and so therefore makes me all sad because yeah. ): Sorry I sound like such an idiot right now.

Eek yeah you're right about the ending.

Well, don't let school win!

lots of love

alyssa

xoxo

p.s. i will be an attentive reader if you do a sequel to breaking bailey. (: BECAUSE I LOVED IT.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx chapter 21 . 7/7/2008
lolness.

very cute.

i liek it. great writing :D

please update soon :)
Indalecio chapter 21 . 6/30/2008
YAY! Brody gets to see Linden again! *dances*

i cant wait for prom, Linden better be queen!
sakuraxshakedown chapter 21 . 6/29/2008
i love how this story plays out perfectly in my mind. and i cant get enough of the characters! keep up the good work!
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