Hi! I came back to your story after reading Finding Grey, a story set in World War 1 where a British girl writes letters to a soldier who becomes MIA in France. Thank you for writing!

Thank you for this lovely and wonderful story!

This is great, truth be told, I skimmed the last chapter first, but went back to this chapter to read your story right. Thank you!

Yaaaaaaaaaay! That was beautiful. I loved each and every word. I almost cried over the last chapter and the last sentence was an absolutely lovely finish to such a marvelous story. I immensely enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your story here with us :)

I enjoyed this story! Great work

Lovely :)

This story was really touching. Write more like this.

This story had potential. Lots of potential, but somehow, I don't think you've actually tapped into the story completely.
Both the main characters feel oddly choppy. Like, I see where you've attempted to develop the characters but I don't actually see it happen myself. Maybe it's the way every emotion is clearly outlined and defined at every moment throughout the story that makes it feel odd. I don't see a transition from acquaintances to friends to lovers, the reader just knows such a complex emotional array has happened because the writer said so.
I guess, what I'm trying to say is that there isn't that subtle insertion of unsaid secrets that actually give stories a realistic base.
Eh.
Also, I think the angst factor could have been upped, a lot, like six times more :P
Otherwise, the last chapter was perfect. It really was. It was cute.
Thank you
:)

I really enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing it.

loved it

Jean u ar so cool,james is quite a character,his character development was good,shows no one is above care

U rock

Really enjoyable story! I found myself having to sit down and read this because I just had to know what was going to happen! I'm glad they were able to get together. I enjoyed reading James's homecoming and, yes, he did deserve to be slapped. I also thought that James was going to die and was very pleased to read that he didn't. Well worth the read!

Great start! I thought you did a wonderful job with this opening chapter. I have been wanting to read this for a long time and I am now just getting the chance to do so. I think you captured your characters perfectly. I can't wait to read more!

I'm in tears after reading this story...