Reviews for Letters to Mary McGraw
writingforeverbecauseitsmylife chapter 13 . 7/15/2008
Yay! I actually thought you killed James for a little bit..but you didn't and that's all that matters! Update soon!
s.hemingway chapter 13 . 7/15/2008
cool cool cool I WANT TO HEAR FROM JAMES! ( Hahaha. Nice going ;D
TwoBeats chapter 13 . 7/15/2008

I can't wait to see what happens next. This chapter is cute and hopeful, I love it. Also, I really like the flow of your short chapters. I think a lot of people write short chapters due to inexperience with description BUT I can tell that it's not about that with your story, and it's just your style. It's awesome.

Looking forward to another new chapter over here. Update soon!
OoohLookACat chapter 13 . 7/14/2008








oh you are so awesome

of course

i knew deep inside that you wouldn't kill him off that simply

no way

he's a fighter

and he'll fight

thankyou again, even though you had probably planned this the entire way through

leaving me to freak out by myself

can't wait for more

chick94 chapter 13 . 7/14/2008
love it i hope you update soon im hanging on to my chair
Subconscious-Flirt chapter 13 . 7/14/2008

I KNEW it.

I was thinking in the beginning...she can't do this. She's not cruel. It's not going to be him in the casket.

And it wasn't.

But you, know, just in case, I was going to write a review telling you I palced my non-death faith in the wrong author.

But I didn't.

Thanks for that.
cheergurl12 chapter 13 . 7/14/2008
aww yay! thnx for such the

quick update :)
emilybh chapter 13 . 7/14/2008
Love it!

:D Update soon! So glad James isnt dead!
funnechick chapter 13 . 7/14/2008
Oh my gosh...I was hoping for it so much, but I didn't want to get my hopes up and be let down if Mary and Mr. Waters did view James' body. I cannot possibly tell you how happy I am that they got the wrong man. YAY! I hope James is okay wherever he is, and it is the sweetest thing that he took his letters with him. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
kim2010 chapter 13 . 7/14/2008

usually, when i read your chapters, i just flitter through...

but for this one, it kinda stopped my heart (a little)

so i had to write a review...]]

i really like the pace that you're taking the story in, how it doesn't progress too fast or go really slow...

and your characters are well developed (well, i think mary is anyways)

this scene was kinda expected, but i still kinda had to guess the outcome...

great job and this story is definately one of my favorites.

keep it up!
thisispush chapter 13 . 7/14/2008
oh. my. goodness.

that was heartwrenching. i rarely review, but that was a very well written scene... you definitley had me crying!
cheergurl12 chapter 12 . 7/14/2008
omg omg omg, you can't just leave me

hanging like this! update sooin please :)!
writingforeverbecauseitsmylife chapter 12 . 7/14/2008
I still love it! At this point, I don't think you can do anything that would make me dislike this story! Update soon!
OoohLookACat chapter 12 . 7/14/2008


if he dies...

well i might just cry

and then that candy bar would be finally useful!

or gasp

its good news

he's back

or he's coming back



i shouldn't set the standard...

just in case he's not


can't wait for more

love this story

s.hemingway chapter 12 . 7/14/2008
AAH WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. TELL ME IT'S NOT A SAD ENDING. Oh no :( Hahah, keep updating! I'll be waiting! Heh.
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