|Reviews for Letters to Mary McGraw|
| funnechick chapter 13 . 7/14/2008
Oh my gosh...I was hoping for it so much, but I didn't want to get my hopes up and be let down if Mary and Mr. Waters did view James' body. I cannot possibly tell you how happy I am that they got the wrong man. YAY! I hope James is okay wherever he is, and it is the sweetest thing that he took his letters with him. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| kim2010 chapter 13 . 7/14/2008
usually, when i read your chapters, i just flitter through...
but for this one, it kinda stopped my heart (a little)
so i had to write a review...]]
i really like the pace that you're taking the story in, how it doesn't progress too fast or go really slow...
and your characters are well developed (well, i think mary is anyways)
this scene was kinda expected, but i still kinda had to guess the outcome...
great job and this story is definately one of my favorites.
keep it up!
| thisispush chapter 13 . 7/14/2008
oh. my. goodness.
that was heartwrenching. i rarely review, but that was a very well written scene... you definitley had me crying!
| cheergurl12 chapter 12 . 7/14/2008
omg omg omg, you can't just leave me
hanging like this! update sooin please :)!
| writingforeverbecauseitsmylife chapter 12 . 7/14/2008
I still love it! At this point, I don't think you can do anything that would make me dislike this story! Update soon!
| OoohLookACat chapter 12 . 7/14/2008
PLEASE DON'T TELL ME HE'S DEAD
if he dies...
well i might just cry
and then that candy bar would be finally useful!
its good news
or he's coming back
i shouldn't set the standard...
just in case he's not
can't wait for more
love this story
| s.hemingway chapter 12 . 7/14/2008
AAH WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. TELL ME IT'S NOT A SAD ENDING. Oh no :( Hahah, keep updating! I'll be waiting! Heh.
| mk985 chapter 12 . 7/14/2008
The breakdown in the diner was very heartbreaking as was Mary's slow realization that maybe she will be OK (if not exactly the same as she was when she first started to write to James). Course that realization didn't last long with the cliffhanger you have left! I can only hope that it will be good and not bad news?
I think it great that you also sorta portrayed how the 2 other people who are arguably the closest to James - his father and Laura, reacted to both the news of the MIA status and how they supported Mary.
Keep it up!
| funnechick chapter 12 . 7/13/2008
Man...I was feeling so badly for Mary in this chapter. Especially when she had that breakdown in the middle of the diner. But I am glad that she started going to see Mr. Waters again and that he's doing well now. Except I'm really anxious to find out the contents of that letter he handed to Mary.
| Subconscious-Flirt chapter 12 . 7/13/2008
That's really a pretty evil place to leave it off. But you wouldn't kill him...would you? I mean, then the whole point of the story would be to like, depress people. And that would just be cruel, really.
I mean, what kind of person kills off the hot guy in the end? It seems plain wrong to me, but do as you like. Little Mary would be heart-broken though. Of course you know that, you made her up, but I'm just saying it would be very cruel to your fictional characters too.
Anyways. I have faith. I hope I have not placed my non-death faith in the wrong author.
You're not THAT cruel. I think
Update soon, I guess. But you're usually good with that, so...bye, until next chapter.
| emilybh chapter 11 . 7/13/2008
the internet is being fuzzy, so I hope this gets through!
I love it! Update soon!
(Okay, so not a very important review, but I just wanted to let you know Im still reading and enjoying it:D)
| Tagrina chapter 11 . 7/12/2008
You nearly made me cry. I think I'm going to have to listen to some sad/soulful music right about now. This is horrible; I knew this was coming, but to come so soon. Goodness. Please continue as soon as possible. I am patiently waiting for you to write again.
| Tagrina chapter 10 . 7/12/2008
Oh my god! This story that you've written is simply too amazing for words! And what a cliffhanger! Now I'm too scared to find out that something horrible has happened to James.
To say in one word: beautiful. This is what I think of your story.
| tornangelwings chapter 11 . 7/12/2008
ooh your mean! but a great way to keep the story interesting. i love it its great.
keep it up
| gulistanlik chapter 11 . 7/12/2008
I knew this was coming! It was about time! But I don't like these parts, to be honest. It just reminds me everytime that good things don't last for eternity. But then I remember that usually good things come after bad things. Yay! I really really wonder what happened to James.