Reviews for Letters to Mary McGraw
cheergurl12 chapter 3 . 6/1/2008
u should try and make the chapters

longer :)
cheergurl12 chapter 4 . 6/1/2008
this is a cute story line! keep writing

and post the next chapter son! :)
kim2010 chapter 4 . 6/1/2008
yes, i was waiting for this story... ]]

but i did notice a mistake...

"With her mind set, Laura locked the diner door and began her walk home when she noticed Laura’s beat"

i think you meant mary instead of laura right?
Seisaset chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
great chapter :)
tornangelwings chapter 3 . 5/31/2008

i would just like to congratulate you on this amazing story. me personally i have always been fascinated by war, or rather by what keeps the soldiers going.

i have a friend getting ready to go to bootcamp for the marines, and i am going to write...whether he likes it or not.

and i have read some of the letters my father(a former marine corporal) had written to my grandma, and a letter or two that he had written to my mother when he was over in Somalia.

i just wanted to let you know that you did an amazing job at keeping it historically accurate.

this kind of reminds of the song by the Dixie Chicks :traveling soldier.

you should listen to it sometime
teardropsONroses chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
this is really good

you should write more soon

if you can

but yeah

I really liked it

very good!
DuchessYappingDog chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
This story is supposed to be super duperly angsty, right? I'm guessing that he dies at war or goes MIA. Rawr. Both sound bad for her. I wonder if he's going to start writing back. I mean, is it possible to fall in love with someone if they don't respond? I know... it is possible (hence unrequited love), but yeah.
ahahDUDE chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
i'm into this story :)

its cute.
gulistala chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
How many chapters is this going to be?

Another interesting chapter. James still hasn't broken out of his shell or at least, the letters haven't been able to smooth his rough edges...yet.

I'm curious as to how this is going to end, but I'll have to wait.

Till the next chappie,

writingforeverbecauseitsmylife chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
Ok, I'm sorry, but a writer as good as you should have at least 30 reviews by now! I am dead serious. Keep on writing!
xHopeLesSdReaMeRx chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
this is, by far, the only story with war that i like..

can't wait for the next chapters..

keep it up:)
Maria Regina chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
You have a nice writing style, I suppose that the thought of writing to someone is always nice (since in this time period it's all e-mails and text messages) - a nice change.

I haven't read any of the others yet, but I do hope you'll win, I guess I could vote for you.

The thought of "not-even-friends-yet" isn't new, but I guess it's a good start; since I don't believe in love at first sight.

kim2010 chapter 3 . 5/30/2008
hey, this is a pretty interesting story...

i can't wait to see what happens between mary and james...
gulistala chapter 2 . 5/29/2008
Oh I didn't know that this was going to be a chapter fic! I'm glad I added you to author alert, then. _

I was initially planning on asking you whether there would be a happy or sad ending to this. But I think the answer would spoil the story for me, hehe.

So, she's going to fall for James as he sends replies back, if he ever does of course. Very interesting. And poor kid, he really has been sheltered from all the bad news.

I honestly can't wait till the next chappie!

Seisaset chapter 2 . 5/28/2008
oh i really like this... although i have a question, what is Skow? please update soon :)
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