|Reviews for Lamentation|
| Jestry chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
I want to say "aww" but I guess that's not really the appropriate response.
For some reason, I really like the "I'm so lost" aspect of this poem.
Nice job. (:
| bb chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I've read through some of your earlier works and I see a lot of improvement. Wonderful work! This is so far my most favourite piece of yours. :)
| Eve's Deception chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
I wrote something smililar to this. I guess its the sentiment of it that reminded me of it, but this is beautiful and wonderful and wonderful and beautiful. I adore it. i can't even explain why but this line sums its up for me:
"A stranger lamented softly about that silly girl
who lost herself as she spoke to the silent stars
so far above reality that even the heavens couldn't save her."