So she commited suicide, Charlie liked her and cared enough to notice the abuse she was being given by Chris... aw, suicide is so unhealthy and it just hurts other people... :( Keep writing!

- Christina

I've read books with abusive boyfriends, but this story seems to be really good. I'm looking forward to stalking ur stories! lol keep writing, and its really good!

This is a wonderful story, and I enjoyed reading it. There is one thing, though, your tenses need to remain consistant. Sometimes they change from past to present; you might wanna look into that. Otherwise, clever story. It is so true in today's society, and this is a accurate interpretation of it. Good luck and write more stories!

This was an amazing story! You write very, very well; everything flows, and you really have a sense of your characters! The ending seemed sad, at least in the way I interpreted it, but it fit. I especially love your descriptions and metaphors in the last paragraph. This was great, and I can’t wait to read more from you!

-Alice

Great chapter! Your writing is very well done. Emmy had some hard decisions to make, and I think she chose wisely…

I’m SO sorry I haven’t gotten to this sooner! Anyway, this was a great chapter. Emmy’s getting herself into trouble…I hope it doesn’t continue!

So sad...

Nice story though! )

this is really good...very interesting about a depress girl..good story

Oh! I do like this story. Minus the over dose towards the end I think a lot of people can relate to it. I'd like to see you start another story. Hope to hear from you soon.

~Elizabeth Wonders

Well I'm looking forward to your next stories!

The ending was a cliffhanger, but it was really good. I thought Emmy was going to end up with Charlie but I guess not or maybe she did , but you decided not to tell us.

Is she dead? I'm gonna say yes. I loved it. It wasn't the longest story but I enjoyed it. Great job and I hope to read more from you soon.

Katie :-)

Omg, that was such a good chapter. It was short and sad, but I liked it. Very great details at the ending.

I didn't think you could get addicted to weed? At least that's what I heard.

I loved the part about a snow globe. Very creative.

Good job!

~KatieTheWriter~

Love it. But I am so sad that Michael left. :(

Aw, I'm really upset that it's over! It was a really great story but I felt like you were kindof rushing it. Anyway, it was amazing! I'm going to miss Emmy.

this story is so sad, but really good. it's very well written, can't wait for the nest update.